“The Biirrtthday Parrtty”

Writing Practice – Finish the Story

Today is my birthday. I am having a big party at my house. I invited everyone in my class. I hope that they all come.

My doorbell is ringing. I answer it. Three of my friends are at the door! The rest of my friends arrive. It is time for the party to begin.

First, we play games. We play pin the tail on the donkey. Jasmine wins. My mom gives her a prize.

She is very happy. I am happy that my friends are having fun. We also play tag and musical chairs.

Next, we eat cake. My favorite kind of cake is chocolate with vanilla icing. My mom made a special cake for me. She wrote “Happy Birthday” on it in red icing. Mom lights the candles. My friends sing the birthday song. I make a wish and blow out my candles.

Now it is time to open presents. Jack hands me the first present. I unwrap it and open the box.

And wow, i get a beautifull doll, the colour is purple, i like it very much. And the second i open a gift from clara, yey i get a white shoes, she know me very well.

Many gifts has i opened, there are very usefull to me, i very appreciate about that. If they know, when they come to my birthday party is a more than a gifts to me. Their time is very valuable.

After that, we make a circle, and then we tell each other about me, what the pray for me, and how about me since we know each other. Its a nice time to mirror in my self, how can i do to the next day, to make me more nice from the last year.

Most of my friends tell if i was be a good girl, but there is also tell if i must be better, must be mature, don’t crying every get a trouble, be a nice girll.

I was deeply moved heard that statement, i love my friends very much. They make me strong in every situation.

Night arrive, we close the birthday party, one by one of my friends is go home, i give them a souvenir, the glass that is my name and their name there. They are go home happily.

I must say a big thank to my parents who organize my birthday party today and make my day. Also to my friends who have attend my birthday party.