Rabu, 26 Oktober 2016

The Snow Day

“The Snow Day”
Writing Practice – Finish the Story



 My sister woke me up early this morning. She ran into my room before the alarm clock went off. “Look outside!” she yelled.

I got out of bed and looked out the window. All that I could see was white snow! There was a man shoveling the sidewalk in front of our house.

Mom came into the room. She brought us each a mug of hot chocolate. “No school today!” she said. I was very happy. My sister was happy, too.

Mom left the room to find our snow clothes. She gave me my blue snowsuit. She also gave me a hat and mittens.

“What are you going to do today with no school?” she asked.
I’m going to the window and indicated a snowball, isay “I wanna make a snowman with my friends” I answer
“Oh great! But be careful, there outside is very cold” she inform
“Okay mom” i say
I’m ran going to outside, and i came to my friend house. My friend Lisa open the door. “Hey what’s up?” she asked
“Wanna play white snow with me? Come on make a snowman haha” I say. “Of course, I Can’t wait” Lisa Answer.
And then me and lisa going to the park, Which is park covered with snow. I make a head snowman with carrot for a nose. And Lisa make the body of snowman. And then we finished to make a snowman.
“Phew lisa we finish” I say. 
“ Yeah, I think so” Lisa say too.
This is snow carrying happiness, For me. I invited lisa to visit my home for eat my mom cake. My sister join too.
“Hey lisa how are you?” my sister asked.
“Im fine of course” Lisa answer

And then we eating my mom cake together. Its very delicious for a snow day. This now holiday ist very happy with a white snow. Beautiful.

the troublemaker

“The Troublemaker”
Writing Practice – Finish the Story
Directions: Read the story below. Then finish it with your own writing.

Allison had a bad night on Saturday. She went to the Smith’s house to babysit their son, Jake, and daughter, Lisa. Jake is four years old. He gets into a lot of trouble. He started the night by pouring his glass of milk all over the floor during dinner. “Clean that up,” Allison ordered. “You can’t tell me what to do,” Jake responded. He ran away from the dinner table. “I’m bored. I want to play a game,” Lisa whined. “Jake, if you clean up your mess we can play a game,” Allison said. “Okay,” Jake said. Allison gave him a handful of paper towels and he used them to clean up the milk. “I want to play hide-and-seek,” he said. “Okay, I will be the seeker first,” Allison said. “You two have thirty seconds to hide!” Allison covered her eyes with her hands and counted slowly from one to thirty. “Ready or not, here I come!” she called. Allison walked downstairs and peeked into the kitchen closet. Nobody was inside. She checked under the couches in the living room. She looked in the garage. Allison decided that nobody was hiding downstairs, so she walked upstairs and continued her search. She opened the door to Lisa’s bedroom and found her hiding under the bed. “I found you!” she squealed. “Okay, now help me find Jake,” she told Lisa. Allison and Lisa searched all over the house. They could not find Jake. “It has been twenty minutes and he is nowhere in sight,” Allison thought. “I wonder where he is.”
Allison back looking for jack. He looked around the room including jack bedroom and the bathroom’s but nobody was inside. Allison and Lisa back looking for jack all over the room but still don’t find jack in there until night they not find jack. Allison and Lisa panic because they not found jack inside the house.They started look for to get out of the house and make neighbors around asking ‘‘what hapenned” and Allison explain what happened after that they help allison and lisa for find jack but that’s racist because jack has not been found.In the tired allison chose to return home to take drink water after he drink water he wonder where jack hiding.whether he was hiding or…? It make allison want to come back to find jack at home and he started from jack bedroom upon arriving there he still don’t find anything but when he sit in chairs in the jack badroom, He heard a stranger sound from inside the closet. After he opened the closed ‘‘JACK !!!!!’’ and the scream it made lisa and people around here and the scream it also makes jack that turned out to hide to fall asleep in her bedroom closet up. After all know what happened. Allison said to jack ‘‘ YOU ARE TROUBLEMAKER !!!’’


the zoo

Today I am going on a class field trip to the zoo. I have never been to the zoo before and I am excited to see all of the animals. My teacher says that it is going to be a busy day. We have been learning about animals in class. My favorite animal is the elephant. I hope that I get to see one.
We are boarding the bus. I sit in the back of the bus with my friends. The ride is about thirty minutes long. We are walking through the gate. I am in a group with five of my classmates and my teacher.The zoo is very crowded with lots of students from other schools. I hope that I will not get lost from my group.
First, we visit the monkeys. They come to the edge of their cages and look at us. The monkeys havea lot of trees to climb on in their cages. One monkey is eating a banana. They look like they are having a lot of fun. I wonder what it would be like to play with them.
Next, we visit the polar bears. They live in an area that has a lot of big rocks and a pond. Most ofthem are sleeping right now. The polar bears are a lot bigger than I imagined them being!
My teacher says that we are going to see the elephants now. We walk for a long time until we finally get to a big field. I can see the elephants in the distance! There are two big elephants and one baby.They are starting to walk in our direction. Maybe I will get a closer look at them. Two elephants were very large and a little hideous, but the baby elephant that although bigger than me, but it was very cute. I want much closer to the elephants, and I want to hold a very cute baby elephant. We were allowed give them bananas provided by the zoo. finally I gave the bananas to the cute baby elephant.the baby elephant , maybe the baby elephant is hungry, so the baby elephant really enjoyed the banana. it is elephant has a big  body, and how much weight the elephant? Ah I think they weight 1 ton or 1 quintal . and the baby elephant i think they weight 500 kg.wow so heavy hahaha... I want to ride an elephant, but my  teacher said we need to go another area.

Next, we visit the dangerous zone,why dangerous zone? Because This area is an area of wild animals excample tiger,lion,rhino and hippo. we must be careful to see them, because they are very aggresive. tigers and lions have teeth and nails are very sharp, can kill a human.tigers and lions is carnivore, they very like meet, everyday they always eat chicken or meet. Hippo and  rhino is herbivore , they eat plants but they are so dangerous animal because Rhino has a very sharp horn, can kill a human, and hippo have big body and hippo have teeth that are very big and sharp. they were very quick in running and swimming , but they are very  protected  because their population. After watch tiger and lions eats lunch , i with my group and my teacher go to the other animals, and at the end of the exit zoo , we can take pictures with animals, i take a picture with baby lion , baby tiger, and phyton. after take a picture we went home , see and meet with the animals in the zoo it is brings happiness in my life....kekekexD

THE ZOO

Today I am going on a class field trip to the zoo. I have never been to the zoo before and I am excited to see all of the animals. My teacher says that it is going to be a busy day. We have been learning about animals in class. My favorite animal is the elephant. I hope that I get to see one. We are boarding the bus. I sit in the back of the bus with my friends. The ride is about thirty minutes long. We are walking through the gate. I am in a group with five of my classmates and my teacher. The zoo is very crowded with lots of students from other schools. I hope that I will not get lost from my group. First, we visit the monkeys. They come to the edge of their cages and look at us. The monkeys have a lot of trees to climb on in their cages. One monkey is eating a banana. They look like they are having a lot of fun. I wonder what it would be like to play with them. Next, we visit the polar bears. They live in an area that has a lot of big rocks and a pond. Most of them are sleeping right now. The polar bears are a lot bigger than I imagined them being! My teacher says that we are going to see the elephants now. We walk for a long time until we finally get to a big field. I can see the elephants in the distance! There are two big elephants and one baby. They are starting to walk in our direction. Maybe I will get a closer look at them.
they are so cute. they have a smooth fur. im so happy when i play with them. they are not malignant like other animals. and then i go to the monkey's cage again. because i feel very interested with them. i want play again with monkeys. First of all we visited the monkeys. They were staring at me like they were going to attack me because I was eating a banana, so we went and had a look and the elephants. One of the elephants stuck it's trunk through the bars and stole my banana.
Next we went and got myself another banana and visited the tigers. A baby was asleep next to it's mother. It was so adorable but sadly we woke it up from the flash of the camera. We ran as the tiger growled at us through the glass. The giraffes were fantastic, they didn't do anything like, steal my banana, growl at us and look like they were going to attack us. They just ate some leaves from the trees. At the end of the day my favorite was the giraffes. For my birthday I want a giraffe named George. i like my field trip



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The beach trip



“THE BEACH TRIP”

I had a fun day today. I went to the beach with my
family. It was my first time I had gone to the
beach in North Carolina.
We woke up early and drove for two hours until we reached the beach. There was a lot of traffic.
We finally found a parking spot and walked to the sand. It was pretty outside and the beach was very
crowded. There were a lot of kids playing.
My dad set up a big umbrella. I laid my towel out
on the sand. My mom helped me put on sunscreen. I didn’t want to get sunburned.
I walked down to the water and stuck my toes in. The water was warm. It felt good. I walked back
to my family and told my brother to come swimming with me.
“I don’t want to,” he said.
“Why not?” I asked.
“I’m afraid of sharks,” he said

 "No wild sharks in North Carolina beach, here were many lifeguards are constantly supervising beachgoers who were playing around the beach, so do not be afraid if there is a wild shark approached" I said.Finally, he wanted me to take a swim, running chase waves and play around this beach. After the swim we were both playing in the sand with forming such a palace Reich and us playing in the sand a bit far from the surf seaside palace so that we make are not destroyed by the pounding waves come. We played with fun unwittingly already the sunset .
The beauty of the sunset is amazing when seen from the North Carolina beach. I and my family feel very happy to relax and play in this beautiful beach. I planned when I got home I will tell my friends and all my brothers and sisters about the beauty of this North Carolina beach.

The 4th of July

Today is the 4th of July. I am celebrating with my family. It is my favorite holiday. I wake up early
in the morning. I go swimming with my brother. We have a pool in our backyard. It is very hot outside.
The pool feels nice and cool.
After I go swimming, I go to the farmer’s market with my mom. We buy a lot of fruit and
vegetables from the farmers. We buy the biggest watermelon I have ever seen. Everybody is excited to
celebrate the 4th of July!
Next, we go to Grandma’s house. We are having a picnic with the whole family. Grandma cooks a
lot of good food. I eat a hot dog, potato salad, and watermelon. My cousins are there, too. We play tag.
When it starts to get dark, we walk to the park. It is time for my favorite part of the day: the
fireworks show!

The fireworks is very amazing. I'm excited when i watched the fireworks show. After i watch it, me and my family going home.  When we're on the way, we are visit the coffee shop . In the coffee shop, my mother and my father order a hot coffee, meanwhile me and my brother order a ice machiatto caramel. In here, me and my brother talking a lot about the school etc with my father and my mother. After that, we are go to home. And i feel in the 4th of July, this holiday is very fun.

By Nawazaka Putri Rinjani

THE FROZEN DAY

 My sister woke me up early this morning. She ran into my room before the alarm clock went off. “Look outside!” she yelled. I got out of bed and looked out the window. All that I could see was white snow! There was a man shoveling the sidewalk in front of our house. Mom came into the room. She brought us each a mug of hot chocolate. “No school today!” she said. I was very happy. My sister was happy, too. Mom left the room to find our snow clothes. She gave me my blue snowsuit. She also gave me a hat and mittens. “What are you going to do today with no school?” she asked.
 "I will lied in my bed all day mom, I feel I falling in love with my bad today" I answered. 
Then my sister was yelled to me "Oh my god! You only wanted lie in your bed in this snowday? You don't want play with me outside?" my sister said. Honestly, I wanted play outside with my sister but today is no school so I wanted to use this gold time to lied in my bed all day long. Without regard my sister word I pulled my blanket and covered my body with that I just heard my mother said "Okay, I will make some cookies for you two" then she left my room. I know my sister annoyed to me but I don't care I feel I will married my bed, I'm so comfort in here then I was slept.
While I was asleep my sister were back to my room and shake my body "Come on! Do you only want to lie here all day? You will miss how exiting play snow outside!" but I don't care. I just wanted slept. After my sister was tired force me she left my room. I peeked from my blanket her face looked so annoyed.
Then I woke and went to bathroom for washed my face. I wore my snowsuit, hat, and mittens.
I went to in front of my house I planned to make snowman with carrot for nose, stone for eyes, some twigs for arms. After I finished that I shouted my sister then my sister was came and I stood behind my snowman
and I said "Hello my name is Olaf! I love a warm hug and I want play with you" My sister looked so happy saw my action.  After that me and sister were played in that snowday happily until we felt tired. Then we enter our house and our mother already serve cookies and hot chocolate on the table.

“The Snow Day”

Name: Dhea Juvica
Date: Oct, 26th 2016

My sister woke me up early this morning. She ran into my room before the alarm clock went off.
“Look outside!” she yelled.
I got out of bed and looked out the window. All that I could see was white snow! There was a man
shoveling the sidewalk in front of our house.
Mom came into the room. She brought us each a mug of hot chocolate.
“No school today!” she said. I was very happy. My sister was happy, too.
Mom left the room to find our snow clothes. She gave me my blue snowsuit. She also gave me a
hat and mittens.
“What are you going to do today with no school?” she asked.
"I wanna make a bowl of zuppa soup," I answered.
I went to the kitchen and made a zuppa soup. My sister followed me. She asked me to make it for her too. I looked for a bowl in the kitchen set but I can't found it.
My mom came to us. She told that all of the bowl have borrowed by our neighbor for their event.
"Oh my..." my sister sighed.
"Oke. What should we do?" I asked to my sister.
She thought and be silent for a while. She looked around. Her eyes has stopped at the cell phone and smiled.
I felt so confuse, "what will you do with the cell phone?"
"Come on, this snow day has made me feel very hungry. I will order pizza and zuppa soup for us. We can calling the restaurant for delivery order. That's a good idea, right?" she said.
My mom laugh for seeing the act of my sister and I just shook my head.

The Zoo


“The Zoo”
Today I am going on class field trip to the zoo. I have never been to the zoo before I am excited too see all of the animals. My teacher says that it is going to be a busy day. We have been learning about animals in class. My favourite animals is the elephant. I hope that I get to see one.
We are boarding the bus. I sit in the back of the bus with my friends. The ride is about thirty minutes long. We are walking through the gate. I am in a group with five of my classmates and my teacher. The zoo is very crowded with lots of students from other school. I hope that I will not get lost from my group.
First, we visit the monkeys. They come to edge of their cages and look at us. The monkeys have a lot of trees to climb on their cages. One monkeys is eating a banana. They look they are having a lot of fun. I wonder what i would be like play to them.
Next, we visit the polar bears. They live in an area that has a lot of big roks and a pond. Most of them are sleeping right now. The polar bears are a lot bigger than I imagined them being!
My teacher says that we are going to see the elephants now. We walk for a long time until we finally get to a big field. I can see the elephants in the distance! There are two big elephants and one baby. They are starting to walk in our direction. Maybe I will get a closer look at them. Finally they are close to us. From a distance all elephant seem the same, but if we look closer they are different.There are two elephant species that are usually recognized: the African elephant and the Asian elephant. The African elephant is bigger than Asian elephant It has larger ears too. When they got closer I try to touch them and give some food for them. Finally I can do it! I am very glad.
After that, we got a chance to ride on the elephant. It was very fun. I nearly fell off when trying to get on the elephant’s back. But it’s ok I really enjoy it. When I ride on the elephant I see a beautiful trees and bird.
After that, we had lunch together. During lunch we enjoyed the sound of birds in the park. Then in the afternoon we saw animals circus. There are some animals like elephants, lions, tigers, bear, rhinoceros birds and other. Finally, we returned home very tired but happy because we had so much fun all the day.

Resume Story The beach Trip By Ivan


                                                                   “The Beach Trip”  

I had a fun day today.  I went to the beach with my family.  It was my first time I had gone to the beach in North Carolina.
We woke up early and drove for two hours until we reached the beach.  There was a lot of traffic.  We finally found a parking spot and walked to the sand.  It was pretty outside and the beach was very crowded.  There were a lot of kids playing.
My dad set up a big umbrella.  I laid my towel out on the sand.  My mom helped me put on sunscreen.  I didn’t want to get sunburned.
I walked down to the water and stuck my toes in.  The water was warm.  It felt good.  I walked back to my family and told my brother to come swimming with me.
“I don’t want to,” he said.
“Why not?” I asked.
“I’m afraid of sharks,” he said.
But I think when I meet the shark, it will be cool. I will pick up and bring back to home to be my pet. After too much converstation and argument, finally my brother goes to swimming with me. I bring a ball and playing it at water. The wave is so calm, make me relax and enjoy.
Than 4 people came at me. They want to playing volleyball with me and my brother. Of course I accept that invitation. We play 3 on 3 volley beach ball. That so much fun. 5.30pm, my father told me to back home
Before I back, I suggest my family to take a picture in this beach. Than….”Chees”. our big smile was come out at that photograph. I’m so happy because I spend my time with my beloved family

the birthday party

“The Birthday Party”

Today is my birthday. I am having a big party at my house. I invited everyone in my class. I hope that they all come. My doorbell is ringing. I answer it. Three of my friends are at the door! The rest of my friends
arrive. It is time for the party to begin. First, we play games. We play pin the tail on the donkey. Jasmine wins. My mom gives her a prize. She is very happy. I am happy that my friends are having fun. We also play tag and musical chairs. Next, we eat cake. My favorite kind of cake is chocolate with vanilla icing. My mom made a special cake for me. She wrote “Happy Birthday” on it in red icing. Mom lights the candles. My friends sing the birthday song. I make a wish and blow out my candles. Now it is time to open presents. Jack hands me the
first present. I unwrap it and open the box. 
I’m so surprised because he give me beautiful wristwatch. 
After all opened gifts , me and my all friends continue the party.
 We all happy with this party, we are enjoyed and not bored.
 we all enjoyed the music played and all of them come dancing. 
The party ended with a group photo.
 And it turns out the party has not served until just there,
 after taking pictures all my friends made a surprise flush dirty water 
all over my body and my head was littered with rotten eggs.
 Although a little annoyed with it, but I also feel very happy, 
and perhaps this is the best surprise for my birthday party every year.