the troublemaker

“The Troublemaker”
Writing Practice – Finish the Story

Directions: Read the story below. Then finish it with your own writing.

Allison had a bad night on Saturday. She went to the Smith’s house to babysit their son, Jake, and daughter, Lisa. Jake is four years old. He gets into a lot of trouble. He started the night by pouring his glass of milk all over the floor during dinner. “Clean that up,” Allison ordered. “You can’t tell me what to do,” Jake responded. He ran away from the dinner table. “I’m bored. I want to play a game,” Lisa whined. “Jake, if you clean up your mess we can play a game,” Allison said. “Okay,” Jake said. Allison gave him a handful of paper towels and he used them to clean up the milk. “I want to play hide-and-seek,” he said. “Okay, I will be the seeker first,” Allison said. “You two have thirty seconds to hide!” Allison covered her eyes with her hands and counted slowly from one to thirty. “Ready or not, here I come!” she called. Allison walked downstairs and peeked into the kitchen closet. Nobody was inside. She checked under the couches in the living room. She looked in the garage. Allison decided that nobody was hiding downstairs, so she walked upstairs and continued her search. She opened the door to Lisa’s bedroom and found her hiding under the bed. “I found you!” she squealed. “Okay, now help me find Jake,” she told Lisa. Allison and Lisa searched all over the house. They could not find Jake. “It has been twenty minutes and he is nowhere in sight,” Allison thought. “I wonder where he is.”

Allison back looking for jack. He looked around the room including jack bedroom and the bathroom’s but nobody was inside. Allison and Lisa back looking for jack all over the room but still don’t find jack in there until night they not find jack. Allison and Lisa panic because they not found jack inside the house.They started look for to get out of the house and make neighbors around asking ‘‘what hapenned” and Allison explain what happened after that they help allison and lisa for find jack but that’s racist because jack has not been found.In the tired allison chose to return home to take drink water after he drink water he wonder where jack hiding.whether he was hiding or…? It make allison want to come back to find jack at home and he started from jack bedroom upon arriving there he still don’t find anything but when he sit in chairs in the jack badroom, He heard a stranger sound from inside the closet. After he opened the closed ‘‘JACK !!!!!’’ and the scream it made lisa and people around here and the scream it also makes jack that turned out to hide to fall asleep in her bedroom closet up. After all know what happened. Allison said to jack ‘‘ YOU ARE TROUBLEMAKER !!!’’